Then I WANT to read your BOOK!!!
From Suttree by Cormac McCarthy:
Dear friend now in the dusty clockless hours of the town when the streets lie black and steaming in the wake of the watertrucks and now when the drunk and the homeless have washed up in the lee of walls in alleys or abandoned lots and cats go forth highshouldered and lean in the grim perimeters about, now in these sootblacked brick or cobbled corridors where lightwire shadows make a gothic harp of cellar doors no soul shall walk save you.
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Could use a few well placed commas for ease of reading, but the subjective nature sets the tone with poetic perfection. I know nothing about this book, but based on this, I am certain I would love it even if I hated the story.
Cheryl Anne Gardner
From Suttree by Cormac McCarthy:
Dear friend now in the dusty clockless hours of the town when the streets lie black and steaming in the wake of the watertrucks and now when the drunk and the homeless have washed up in the lee of walls in alleys or abandoned lots and cats go forth highshouldered and lean in the grim perimeters about, now in these sootblacked brick or cobbled corridors where lightwire shadows make a gothic harp of cellar doors no soul shall walk save you.
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Could use a few well placed commas for ease of reading, but the subjective nature sets the tone with poetic perfection. I know nothing about this book, but based on this, I am certain I would love it even if I hated the story.
Cheryl Anne Gardner
Comments
I did like Pretty Horses too, but that is the only thing I have read of his.
McCarthy has said that he doesn't like quote marks and other punctuation "blocking up" the page. What he calls "blocking up" I call "an important visual cue that someone is speaking."
He writes beautifully. Pure poetry on the page. I read him because there's no one else I can read who writes the way he does. I'd rather not have to backtrack to rewire all the connections he could make by simply using all the keyboard functions at his disposal, but I suppose it's a small price to pay, considering.
Even "Words into Type" tells would be editors not to "F" around with an author's use of commas. However, lack of use can make a sentence exhausting for the reader, as did that McCarthy quote for me.
As for my own personal quirks, I am an ellipses and an em-dash lover, and I am not too overly fond of the semi-colon.